Description in the writing explores the background, pans around the room and then zooms into the subject of this portrait.
Very good spatial organization in writing.
Good work, Nithin! Keep it up!
Clocks
of all shapes and sizes covered the wall. The wall was a light beige color with
the texture of wood. Old posters and mirrors, in mint condition, were also
placed on the wall. The room had a musky smell to it. There were several pictures
of the family of a woman, placed on a glass coffee table. Next to the coffee
table there was a desk painted a charcoal black. On the right most end of the
desk there was a hand embroidered handkerchief. Behind the desk sat an elderly
lady. She wore a white jacket and a pearl necklace. She had small, round
glasses over her eyes and her hair was a light shade of orange. She had a
reminiscent look on her face and was deeply lost in thought.
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