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Thursday, 12 December 2013
Showcase - Picture Prompt - Vegetable seller - Anumita
A very strong conclusion - it ties up the entire story.
This story makes connections between the state of the vegetables and the girl in the picture.
Well written!
The old rusted yellow colored wall with the open old
rustic wooden door looked very dull. There was a three stepped staircase in
front of the door and one could often see a little, thin, frail girl sitting on
the steps all by herself. The house belonged to a vegetable vendor. He would
put a cloth on the floor on the left side of the staircase and the vegetables
on it to sell. He had two kids, a son named Rahu and a daughter named Gazara.
Gazara was always dejected. Her parents were always partial towards her
brother. They had once thought to send her to a school but their neighborhood
told them that she would not help her parents if she went to school. So she was
not sent to school. Only her brother went to school. Her parents had the same
bias in other matters also. She was not allowed to go out to play, or celebrate
festivals. While her brother got sweet treats and good food, she did not.
The same thing happened today. Her parents and her
brother went to the fair whereas she was asked to stay back to sell vegetables.
As was her usual self, she sat on the staircase, hand on hand, staring at
nothing in particular. A weighing scale was lying on her left. Next
to it were some withered vegetables which she was supposed to sell. A few frail
cabbages, yellowed cucumber, a few bunches of insipid spinach and some more
vegetables in old cartons. It appeared as if even the vegetables reflected her
dilapidated stated, deprived of everything good in life.
Monday, 9 December 2013
WOW - Innocuous
Meaning:
Not offensive, dangerous or harmful
Lacking intent or capacity to injure
Usage:
The innocuous looking lump on his forehead turned out to be malignant - it is a good thing they got it checked by the doctor instead of getting fooled by the looks of it.
The student was merely curious when he asked the teacher an innocuous question. He did not mean to hurt the teacher's feelings.
Not offensive, dangerous or harmful
Lacking intent or capacity to injure
Usage:
The innocuous looking lump on his forehead turned out to be malignant - it is a good thing they got it checked by the doctor instead of getting fooled by the looks of it.
The student was merely curious when he asked the teacher an innocuous question. He did not mean to hurt the teacher's feelings.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Showcase - Writing prompt - Island - Vaidehi
Great writing, Vaidehi!
Very good visualization and description. You have painted a nice picture with words.
Keep it up!
I peered through my binoculars as I tried to navigate the
island. There it was my own island, approximately three kilometres away, looking
dazzling above the crystal clear, blue ocean. As we approached the island, I
gave a cue to my assistant to disembark.
Water rushed onto the island, an almost perfect circle. I
could see palm trees shaking as if busily painting the sky with balls of water hanging
down from them. Due to weariness which had formed in my body, I settled under a
palm tree and soon fell asleep.
I woke up with the smile of the sun and the abundance of
sand surrounding me. The sand was utterly rough and lying down on it stung my
back. Small fish leaped from the sandy shores of the island to the depths of
the ocean. The island was pretty decent so why had the people sold it to me for
only five dollars? This question irked me greatly, formed waves in my mind
giving me a hard time. I decided to go on a small expedition across the island.
I ambled on the sweltering sand of the island looking all
around. Then something caught my eye. At a far distance I could view serpents
of smoke. This indicated that a human was present on the island. When I reached
the place from where the smoke had originated, I was startled to find a witch preparing
a broth in a cauldron. Her hair fell on her eyes like curtains. She had a long,
pointed nose and blood-red lips. She wore a purple hat which matched her scary
costume.
She glanced at me from head to toe. I tried to communicate
with her asking her about the island. She replied to me that she had been
living on this island for thirty five years. This island was cursed to have bad
luck. Very bad spirits, blood-thirsty vampires, snake-women, giants, ghosts and
many other creatures lived on this island. She also told me that if I do not
leave the island by sunset I would be trapped in here forever.
Now I understood
why the owners had sold this island to me for five dollars!! I got really
scared, ran, got all my belongings and boarded my ship. I swore that I would
never come back to this island again.
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